Not the best you've done but its certainly original.

I loved it but not as much as I love your others.

Constructive criticism *heavy machinery start*
lol
~Emma
xxoo

I really like this, the imagery conveyed by it is incredible.
It's dark, i like dark.

Hold it
Crush it in your hands
The plastic smiles
And bleeding hands

was my fav bit.

I also liked how u repeated the opening at the end.

Great poem suz, rock on.

Really nice poem, I actually liked the one I read before this. It held more imagery. This really didn't seem so dark, it was missing the descriptions. It was a good poem though.

Love it! sad, dark, and mysterious at the same time. Great use of voice.

Wow..this poem is really awsome i lik it alot.........5/5 for me!!

Hm...I'm not sure what to say, here. I really liked it, yet I didn't... I loved the thought put into the poem, but it didn't have the...flow to it, I guess, that I felt should have been there. But it was very nicely done. Good job.

xDarkSuicidex 5.5

Original piece of work,
i liked the imager, the poem has something to it , unexplainable, i dont know i guess thats why i liked it :)

5/5

~StefQ

Another great poem 5/5

I didn't really get the feel from this
poem that I got from reading your
others. There seems to be alot that
is missing. I liked the poem though
because it's original so I give you a
5/5 for your hard work that I know you
put into it.

Letty

I like this poem so much, Like omg it's incredible. I don't remember reading it before, but apparently I have.
I love how dark this poem is, and reading it slowly really emphasises the darkness in the poem, it flows brilliantly.
Awesome poem Sexy Suzie.
Mwah