I agree, there was a lot of beautiful imagery. Also a lot of descriptions, and you created a really nice scenario. Well done.

After reading this now I want to go and watch that movie! It was really good...there were a few spelling errors, just like capitalization and what not, but its ok because you had amazing description that the readers won't even notice it because you describe Poisedon excellently!
nice write!
Chell

I'm with Chels... You described Poseidon magnificently well!! A wonderful piece, that kept my undivided attention.