by Chelsey
Sar, this was a really different poem from the usuals I read on PnQ....I had to think about it first (which is always good when poets stir up that in the readers mind), I liked it!! I didn't like the last part though girl because you never know who you can impact with just a smile or just a glance, just a simple hand gesture. Very interesting topic and I enjoyed the read! |
by Simon Hayes
Well you certainly made an impact with this piece!! What makes you think you made no impact?! We all have an impact on every day. The fact that these things were noticed, means you made an impact upon life. I like the way you've captured the UK bus stop scenery... Beautifully done! I very much enjoyed this piece. |
by Melissa
I really like the uniqueness and power of this poem... Nice piece! |
by Tiny Reader
Hey no one noticed my repeated word! |
by Midnight Sun
This was really good! I love the humility you show...and it's kinda ironic cause I'm sure the people you were writing about were sure they didn't make any impression either. |
by Lovely Bones
Deep poem, I must say. Honestly, I've never even thought of this before, but it must be true. Yet, it's hard not to think of Sarah White and think of the impact she's made on this site. i lvoe your poetry. |
by Baby Rainbow
Aww wow thats cool i like it xxx |