Nathan this is good for me,, well your poetry is short but its too meaningful! may god bless u

Terribly sorry if this is true! No one should have to feel that way...I say to hell with those who disown you thats just completly wrong, and you show them who you are and who you want to be..make a change within yourself and they'll see what they could have known! I like the way you write keep it up!
Thanks for the comments!
Krissey

Awe! Wow! This was soooo sad. Nicely written though. Flowed great! :]

Natalie``

P.S. This is so cool, I'm 17 and from Aussie, too. Annnnd, my nickname used to be Supergirl. Lol.. =P

This was very good I loved the feeling of it. It felt like you were still depressed when you wrote it and it just flowed very nicely. Keep it up!
~Midnight Sun