by Sweet lig Aug 21, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
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by Michelle18
I like this one... you explained your emotions very well.. the flow was good and everything. 5/5 on this one.=] |
I love how you wrote this poem about the reasons why you're in love. Its a very good poem. The flow was nice, the concept was great, and it was worded beautifully! 5/5 |
This is a really good poem. Although, I think this line is missing a word: |
Aw, this was such a sweet poem. It's a really great poem. 5/5 |
by Bryan
I can tell u have experienced love before, it can be a good feeling or could be the worst one, this is a very very good poem, perfect grammer, 5/5!!! |