by Jessica
This was good.. But it had a lot of grammer mistakes.. Also, the flow wasn't that good.. The love and emotion was nice though, as were your descriptions.. Nice job 4/5 |
by Krissey
Yeah Jessy said it..the only problem was the grammar...I tend to get turned of when there are grammar mistakes and so do other readers, but besides that, I did keep reading and I liked it! You described the love you feel for this person very deeply and the poem was bursting with emotion! Excellent job with that! |
by Sweet lig
ı love darling |
by Jenni Marie
Again, another favourite. |
by Bryan
I can tell u have experienced love before, it can be a good feeling or could be the worst one, this is a very very good poem, perfect grammer, 5/5!!! |
Aw, this was such a sweet poem. It's a really great poem. 5/5 |
This is a really good poem. Although, I think this line is missing a word: |
I love how you wrote this poem about the reasons why you're in love. Its a very good poem. The flow was nice, the concept was great, and it was worded beautifully! 5/5 |
by Michelle18
I like this one... you explained your emotions very well.. the flow was good and everything. 5/5 on this one.=] |