Unreachable

by Antithesis   Aug 21, 2006


Red tears
they fall from my eyes
bringing along the pain
the memories
the ache
u brought me

the liquefied memories
leaving them behind
not letting any feelings
take hold of me
im not gonna miss u
anymore than u miss me

u are a star
shining bright
in the night sky
the star
that i will
never be able to reach

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  • 18 years ago

    by Biscuit

    Nicely written but lacks punctuation which is, in my opinion, vital.

    The structure is very good, brings a lot of impact to the poem.

    However i am slightly confused as to what this poem is actually about. The last stanza doesnt seem to fit with the rest, as in, the other two are describing something bad/unkind but the last stanza says 'u are a star'...which surely is a compliment??

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