You want to be wanted but you need to be loved
You shouldn't be where your going to get pushed and shoved
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I LOVED those lines! =D

Awe! Thanks for writing me a poem, hun! I lovers you, so much. More than you love meeeee. =P Tehe!

And, and, and, I loved this poem. You wrote it so well. Awe! Thanks for making me happy again! Ima luff you, forever. E>

Aww that poem was amazing and heart felled.
If your lost come and run to me
I will find you and show you how it's meant to be.
I love your poetry its so... so emotonial and indepth at teh same time. LIke you described this perfectly :D

Aww that was a beautiful poem for Nat!!! I should write a poem for my SMAWCE sister!! You really are an amazing person Nelle. Not only as a poet, but as a friend. It's good to have come across your path, you make me smile with your poetry and for that, I thank you. This was a wonderful piece, it shows your kind heart and how it works so well for others. I hope that one day, a deserving boy comes along and has the chance to hold your hurt. He will be very lucky. Really good poem Nelle :)

Good job and great message in this poem. I think you can do better with the flow and the rhymes. My favorite line is, "You want to be wanted but you need to be loved"

This is really good and so true...i like this poem a lot and it really has a lot of things ppl can use...5/5

Awwhh, that was sooo sweet hunny! The descriptions were beautiful and full of love, the flow was great, and I just loved it.. Wonderful work hun, Ily! 5/5

Iloved your poem so much

Good poem nice work

This is great poem full of love, some lines i fell so touch i really impress this is very nice for me keep it up thanks for sharing i really enjoy

Aw...That's so sad.
I should keep that in mind XD
Well,
Keep up the great work!

--MARZZ OUT