The way he said i hate you

by littlenuthead   Aug 21, 2006


The way he said i hate you
the way he said its true
how that made me sad
the way he just said good bye
with that bloody razor
his thoughts slowly went away
with every beat of my hart i told him that i loved him
he just looked at me and i saw the truth that day the day
he said i hate you was the day i said i die you will never know how much i loved him but he took it all away so i took the razor and i lost every thought of him
and then no one will ever know how he made me feel when he took away my love when he took it for real this day is a day when the ski turns black as i say to my self if i cant have him then nobody can with a razor in my mind and a gun in my hand i start on my way to meet him i tell him that i love him and that every things OK but what he don't know is he wont get away i show him what he made me done it;s really fun i pull out the gun oh yea it's so fun so how do u like me now as i hold the gun to my head he tells me that he loves me it's not over a shot is heard blood starts running down at 1st i think its me then he falls to the floor my love has just died i killed his love at last then i turn the gun and another shot is heard then 3 angles take 2 more angles home

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  • 18 years ago

    by i love ben!!

    Thats really good...it couldve been longer but it was short and to the point. you got what you wanted to say out and thats all that matters. what i want to know is why am i the first to comment? it was very good!! smh..anyways i can relate to that alot i really can...keep up the good work!! :D