Good bye mother
by darkness Aug 21, 2006
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Even now your goin i know you look down from above.you were my mother but now in angel of God. you mite not be on earth but you live in my heart don\'t weary about me you taught me well you cove rd me in love and i will past that on to my children some day but i wont be sad cuz i know ill see you some day ill never forget you mother |
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18 years ago
Flow...there was none.
Grammar: horrible, again. I think grammar is a very intense thing to have when you're writing.
[mite]
Correction: Might
[weary]
Correction: Worry
[cove rd]
Correction: Covered
[cuz]
Correction: 'Cause/Because
I thought the many grammar mistakes took me off somewhere else, and I was concentrating on figuring out what they meant, and not the poem. =) 4/5 xoxo
Samanatha
