Flow...there was none.
Grammar: horrible, again. I think grammar is a very intense thing to have when you're writing.

[mite]
Correction: Might

[weary]
Correction: Worry

[cove rd]
Correction: Covered

[cuz]
Correction: 'Cause/Because

I thought the many grammar mistakes took me off somewhere else, and I was concentrating on figuring out what they meant, and not the poem. =) 4/5 xoxo

Samanatha