Look Inside

by David McIntosh   Aug 21, 2006


Your eyes are my windows
Always open, never closed
Their sun is always bright
Never ready for a fight

When I look inside
I see my life
My dream is that one day
I will see my wife

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  • 18 years ago

    by Gary Jurechka

    This is sweet and romantic-so simply stated yet so full of meaning.The rhyme scheme between the 1st and 2nd stanza is different, a bit off, and I would personally change line 4, but it really doesn't disrupt the flow or emotion you've expressed so heartfelt and true.Well done.

    GaryJ

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