Oh this is so obviously written about your BBQ the other night with your boo Chels and its sooo cute to hear about your lil crush it makes me smile it really does. Its brought a brilliant poem out you too its not often you write lovey dovey kinda poems and this still portrays your edge of innocence in its words...you must keep me updated on how things are going in that department babygirl - great write babes but I bet you still got butterflies in your tummy!
Love your bigga titta Risa xox

Damn! What a wonderful write... So inspiring. This piece is filled with so much desire it makes one want to burst. A very alluring write, well done Chels!! :)

If I must be honest...I love it. I love the way you kept alluding to the things you like about him and the way when each line is read there is a small flicker of hope that by the end becomes a brightly burning flame in your heart. It seems to be an almost certainty that he may feel the same way. But best of all it's pure. It's love in its purest form because you're unsure, but you hope against hope that you'll see love reflected in his eyes. It fascinates one from the very beginning. Phenomenal!

Beautifully done my friend.

I like the whole concept of it "a possible romance" the idea is so great...you've just inspired me to write one like this thank you.

One word....Beautiful!

Well done! :)

Reali sweet! :) well written! :) very good!

Aww, this is so cute! I absolutely LOVE your poems, they are always incredible. Chels, thankyou so much for your comment on my poem... it really cheered me up and inspired me. You're right, the guy that I'm dreaming of still could be out there. Thanks so much hun. It really means alot to me that you'd go out of your way to help me like that. If ya ever need someone to talk to just let me know, I'm always here, even though I don't get on much anymore. Keep writing your amazing poems, kay?!

-nik

Nicely done, absolutely b e a u tiful