Aww =( this is so sad, im sry for your loss. I think this was a weel written poem and you did a wonderful job! -- comment on mine-- Meg

That's a wonderful poem demi keep writing you're really good at it

Catherine

This is so sad but it seamns like a story not a poem but good work

This is very nice. I liked it a lot. Nice emotion and depth. Great work!

-Jennifer.

Aww this is so sad :( sorry for ur loss.
I liked it, good work

I know what u mean...my friend died in a car accident...well umm...it was a good poem!