Perfection

by *Cosmic*Whispers*   Aug 21, 2006


She is perfect
Perfect figure, Perfect face
Never a hair out of place
But still she cries

He is perfect
He sweeps you off your feet
Says without you he's incomplete
But it's all lies

They are perfect
As united as they seem
Young Loves innocent dream
But her bruises stay

We are perfect
The friends everyone wants
But all the hateful, mocking taunts
Don't go away

I am perfect
Nothing can shake this beaming grin
Laugh when people say I'm getting thin
But blood still flows

So much perfection
But it is all skin deep
So many secrets we all keep
That no one knows

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  • 18 years ago

    by SilenceBreaksTheHeart

    Awww hun...I was missin your poetry so I came to read some more (even though I already read this one) I really love this. I know exactly how this feels...well...that isn't really the right word choice but you get what I mean I hope. lol.
    I hope everything is going good with you hun.

    Bre

  • 18 years ago

    by xox kate xox

    Ooh baby i hadnt been on this here sight for yonkies but that's truly brightened up my graphics lesson. . . I want your babies

    xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Barbara

    I love the rhyming pattern. I liked this one a lot!! great job!! 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by SilenceBreaksTheHeart

    I wasn't very into this at first but then I really started to read it and I really liked it...I read it twice. It was a beautiful poem and sadly true. I always get so excited when I see you have a new poem lol...you did an amazing job with this one.
    5.5
    Breanna

  • 18 years ago

    by Stephy

    SO true....wow you put that out so well
    great job -xxxx-

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