Comments : Perfection

  • 18 years ago

    by Stephy

    SO true....wow you put that out so well
    great job -xxxx-

  • 18 years ago

    by SilenceBreaksTheHeart

    I wasn't very into this at first but then I really started to read it and I really liked it...I read it twice. It was a beautiful poem and sadly true. I always get so excited when I see you have a new poem lol...you did an amazing job with this one.
    5.5
    Breanna

  • 18 years ago

    by Barbara

    I love the rhyming pattern. I liked this one a lot!! great job!! 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by xox kate xox

    Ooh baby i hadnt been on this here sight for yonkies but that's truly brightened up my graphics lesson. . . I want your babies

    xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by SilenceBreaksTheHeart

    Awww hun...I was missin your poetry so I came to read some more (even though I already read this one) I really love this. I know exactly how this feels...well...that isn't really the right word choice but you get what I mean I hope. lol.
    I hope everything is going good with you hun.

    Bre