Awwwwwwwww.........thts sooo sad it makes me cry a little...
u must really luv her dontcha.....
a 5/5 again...

Awwww ^^^ I agree. It is soo sad when people that love each other can't make it work...I'm really sorry, because I know how it feels to have a love die, it's the worst feeling ever. I really hopw everything works out good for you, and that you are happy.
Anyways, this was a really beautiful poem...I wasn't sure about it at first because of how long it was, but once I got into it it was great. I really loved the title of this one too...I was drawn to it. lol. Great job, I loved it. Goodluck.
5.5
Breanna