Without You

by Sweet As Sugar   Aug 21, 2006


A world without you is like the day with no sun...
the night without a moon...
a picture with no frame...
a joke thats so lame...
like me, without a name...

like a world so dark thats always night ..
Like me, with no sight...
like a dark creepy street with no light...

like a dead tree with no leaves...
like honey, without any bees...
like a flower with no smell ..
Like a church with no bell...
like a shopkeeper that doesn't sell...

like a story that has no end...
like a precious message that u cant send...

a world without u is pointless, has no meaning ..
Not even a drop of joy...
its so messed up and so wrong...
its like a stupid sad old song...

like a clown with no tricks ..
Like a house built with no bricks...
its obviously sure, that I cant live a second in a world...
without u!

p.s. please comment and tell me what u think!

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  • 18 years ago

    by TRAGiC BEAUTY

    THiS iS REALLY AMAZiNG! GREAT STORY AND AMAZiNG RHYMiNG! KEEP iT UP!

    x3------SHELBY

  • 18 years ago

    by PonderBoy

    WOW

    I loved it!

    5/5 and i dont give that out too offten

    Keep writing!

  • 18 years ago

    by Aline

    Cool, i liked it 4/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Cherry

    VER VERY NICE WORK!!! Seriously! Ur describing it with true love....Keep up the good work! ;)

  • 18 years ago

    by LOVEmeNOT

    This is good....and i loved how u ended it...you can really see how you feel for him...good job....5/5