I really like this :)
i love the way you write. its unique. and awesome :)
keep it up xoxox

Omg, Noni! This was really sad. I hope you're okay.

The poem was excellent though, I loved the title, woweee-- and once I read the poem, I was amazed. Loved the way you set it out, and the flow, everything in this poem I loved. Great job hun. Keep it up!

Natalie``

I agree with Nat, I thought it was an excellent poem and the title was great. I really hope you're ok Noni.
Your last few poems were really sad or dark.. :(