Numb

by xxmichaelxx   Aug 21, 2006


I can't hold this feeling
it's out of control
i can't tame it
it's eating my soul

it's killing my heart
it's stabbing my inside skin
the knife's too sharp
I'm loosing my life within

it's grabbing me from my back
it's pulling the living life out of me
it takes me fast, my body got numb
it's hyper, it's crazy

i don't know what it is
it's just here all the time with me
i ask it to stop
but it just made it more angry

it's ripping my skin
you can see my inside
my heart tangled with veins
i can see the water it was making me drink, full of poison, full of chloride

but i had to drink it
i didn't feel anything
then a second later
i was behind everything

was i drunk?
was i in hell?
was i in heaven?
no body could tell

i just became numb

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  • 18 years ago

    by WitherBlisterBurnandPeel

    Very different but well written
    good job

  • 18 years ago

    by SilenceBreaksTheHeart

    Wow..I can really tell how you are progressing as a writer...I envy your talent. This was so amazing I absolutely LOVED the word choice, I mean, amazing. I can't decide which is my favorite, this might be it now. This was so beautiful...I mean I really don't know what to say about this one...I loved this. You have so much talent, your such a beautiful poet.
    5.5
    Breanna

  • 18 years ago

    by Momentary Relapse

    Sometimes the flow was off. There was also some words that contributed to messing with the flow. Loved the verbs though. The way it was worded gave it a sharper feel in a strange way.
    ~Faith-less

  • 18 years ago

    by The Lonely Rose

    Wow another excelent poem by u!! i get sorta shivers from this....a 5/5!!

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