by Lauren Aug 21, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
He proved to me something I didn't believe, |
I thought this poem made perfect sense..it was beautifully written..nice job!=] |
by Debbie
This was rather delightful to read. It has a wonderful diction and plot. The theme was also organized and progressed quite well. When I reread it, it still held the same effect to me the first time a read it--simply endearing and lovely. =] I'm looking forward to read more of your work. |
by swill
Omg lauren...is this another heart break? |
Great poem. I loved the plot. The rhyming was excellent as well as the flow. I really got lured into this poem and understood it 100%.[[Keep it up]]] |
by Dan Bloom
Words of advice... |