I understand and also I do like to get some advice!
I enjoyed your poem it was well written. Bye Bye

Hey I edited the poem My first love can you please read it and see whether it makes sense now!

I like it its cute how i was around the girl i liked we are now dating
nice work
jt

For a title how about "love at first glance"?

nice poem. and the greatest things in the world are nice :)

Oh thanks...