Wow. even the title got my attention!!!!! that was one awesome poem. the words made it even nicer. keep up the work.

Not your best, but it isn't THAT bad. Mind me, I become harsh at times. The flow was horrible, in my opinion, as was the hold it is SUPPOSED to have on the reader. I forced myself to read on. Better luck next time. 3.8/5

No worries, I don't actually vote on the voting thing, I just say what I would vote.

Very good
not your best
but it was still alright
nice work