by Willow Aug 22, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
Take that last breath, |
That was beatiful! you are a really good poet. |
by X~Angie~X
Omg i love it.. its really sad tho.. i like how u wrote htis... this is how i feel. so yea.. ur an amazing writer.. i can really relate to ur poems and everything. u seem like ur a great person.. someday i wish to meet u. well keep on writing and u can also email me if u ever want to cuz i will reply always.. |
by i love ben!!
I loved that...the emotion and flow go well together and u repeating take your last breath put more emphasis on it...great work!! |