Very nice. i can relate. i like it. 5/5.
love willow xxoo

5/5 i love it...i also can relate. im the same way...keep up the good work!!

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Wow i really really love this poem your line..
Behind it is my secrets hidden in lies
No one nos no one cares
is my fav in your whole poem great job!
5/5 keep it up
auna

I'm good at worrying... I should be payed to do it lol! Its good to have friends whom you love... as long as they love you back! Well people always say you get worse before you get better right?? The only problem I have with that statement is your always getting worse never getting better. What you have to do is wait for a break through the clouds. I picture it like I'm drowning... everytime I think this is it I resurface for just enough air to make it through the next wave. step by step sweetie... step by step! I know what you mean by this poem! I totally feel the same way. There aren't many people who I let in either. 3 people is my rule. Until I have solved my issue there ae only 3 people I let in one of them (for me) is Christ one is my best friend Rachel and one is my youth leader either courtney or cristina. It helps me. I dont know. Well sleep tight or maybe have a good day w/e! Its night here so... ttyl!
Kat

Hey well written poem!
in the last stanza though, you written "nobody nos", i think it should be "nobody knows".
well done, excellent poem!
love mel

I thought you did a nice job expressing yourself in this poem. Very good job! Jpoet* (thanks for ur comments)