I really liked this poem..it was full of anger and you wrote it with rage! That was awesome..the first line made me chuckle a bit...haha you saliva. I laugh because I can just picture someone screaming that and thats not what you scream in an ordinary arguement! lol..good write it was a pleasure to read!
Krissey

WOW! i really felt the anger in that poem. Great job!

Very nice poem

My favourite of yours so far.

The best one i've read so far,but I still think you can do better.Check your spelling:) and smooth your rythm. I must say though,your attitude in sending emotions to the reader is unique.

I really enjoyed reading this poem. It really is wonderful. It's filled with so much anger and sadness. You have done a wonderful job with this one. You style is very unique. I just think that you should work on your spelling and that you should focus a little more on the rhythm because it is a bit off. Other then that I say excellent write. 5/5

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Letty

I sense anger in this poem. I like the tone in it. I can see that you really improve in writing.. keep up the good work!

Damn, this was such a powerful poem. I felt the anger from this. 5/5

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It was very deep. It sounded as though you were pissed off when writing this. I like it, but it could've been written a little better. But because of the feeling you put into it, it deserves a 5/5

This one was okay... its sounds like you were kinda angery in this one with all of the exclamation points....but i think you should revise it a little..the flow was kinda off at times.. 4/5 on this one