She Died With Bloody Perfection

by -Ѕнэ đιεđ ѕсѓεάміηĝ-   Aug 22, 2006


Pretty little girl
a smile sewed in place
plastered into perfection
fake and painted face

pretty little girl
eyes made of frozen glass
hidden, shameful secrets
behind her smile, is a past

pretty little girl
dying inside the perfection
cracked beneath the surface
is a deadly broken reflection

Pretty little girl
behind the hazel eyes
broken and rejected
worthless, bloodied lies

pretty little girl
broken by a boy
used and exploited
used as a toy

pretty little girl
died with bloody perfection
deadly lies, pretty tears
all in the name of rejection

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  • 17 years ago

    by Chemically Corrupted

    Nice...it speaks the truth...

  • 18 years ago

    by mistressxsork

    OH MY GOD. I LOVE THIS ONE. It is so good! The emotion, the depth, the heart! TRULY AMAZING. Nice work!

  • 18 years ago

    by Robie Lincer

    Wow this is another nice poem! u got the talent big times! keep it up!

  • 18 years ago

    by twisted reality

    Ohhh! I liked this one loads! ^_^

    [pretty little girl
    broken by a boy
    used and exploited
    used as a toy]
    ^^^Gosh! You have no idea how much that resembles me! And I know how you feel if it's true. If you ever need anyone to talk to, PM's are welcomed. =)

    I liked the flow, the rhymes were a bit cliche, but the idea was fantastic. I liked it a lot. =) 5/5 xoxo

    Samantha

  • 18 years ago

    by Megann Lee

    This..I can realte to in so many ways, as could alot of teenage girls I am guessing. I really loved it, it was sad though.

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