Love of Mine

by FallenAngel44   Aug 22, 2006


On theis moonlit stroll I take,
I am sure my heart will break.
For my one true love had left me.
My love for him, he cannot see.
I wish for his laughter to fill my ears
This thought only supplemented with my tears
I will no longer see his face,
I my once full heart, now an enormous space,
I loved him ever so much,
He no longer within my touch
I guess this is my destiny,
For him again I shall never see.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Raychil

    This was a very strong poem of love for someone. I liked it. Just some small critique, I think you're trying too hard to rhyme words, remember, there are many stanzas out there, let your words flow. Otherwise I really did like it. Lovely.

  • 18 years ago

    by Kirsty palmer

    Wow such a well written, powerful and sad poem, you write it well... just some handy hints... on the first line you wrote 'theis'.. i think it is supposed to be 'this' not critique just help :) keep writting..
    Best Wishes..
    Please rate and comment on my poems, Thanks..
    Kirsty Palmer xXx

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