Sorry my Nour el ain

by VivVanilla   Aug 22, 2006


I know you loved me
And maybe you still do
But as I said to you once
In the very first moment
Before all this came true
I can't control my heart,
Not my mind
All what will happen
It's not in my hands.

From your words made me cry
I found your pain and coldness you have inside
I wish I could do something for you
But I can't sell my heart, not my soul
Not even because of you.

All I can say is that I am sorry
I never meant to let you down
I tried so hard to make your dreams true
And never meant to crush your heart
Now I know I did that to you
But just I couldn't love like you do.

Forgive me, I am truly sorry
You are like my brother
Or like my best friend
But that's all I can give
My heart is somewhere around
And I can't live without my it
So I have to follow
Where ever it goes.

Say you forgive me please,
I didn't mean to hurt you
Didn't mean to be bad
Didn't mean to make you sad
Maybe the truth hurting now
But the future is waiting you
And one day all pain will fade away.

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  • 18 years ago

    by VivVanilla

    U r too kind for me Nouredine..

  • 18 years ago

    by nouredine

    You are excused although you should't ask for pardon you aren't to excuse, you did nothing wrong to me, you have neven been bad.. you are so tender and soulful... you give me this pure and warm which doesn't exist in my life....

  • 18 years ago

    by VivVanilla

    Hi Kirsty!

    And thanks..I really need some help sometimes, always feel free to teach me.. I am just humble front of criticism and thankfull from all help. :)

    I have read some of ur poems..I like ur style. I will keep reading. :)

  • 18 years ago

    by Kirsty palmer

    WOW...such a powerful poem, you wrote it so well there is just one little problem..not critique..just help :) ..In the last stanza, you wrote..'meant' and i think you mean 'mean'..on both occasions.. hope this helps..
    Best Wishes..
    Please rate and comment on my poems, Thanks..
    Kirsty Palmer xXx