by Lisa Mar 7, 2004
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
I know if there were a way |
by Vanessa
A wonderfully written sad write. A broken heart never seems to heal. So it is amazing when it fianlly does. The emtions were really strong, and the flow was flawless, Great job on the vocab, and word choice. 5/5 |
by Kayla
wow great poem i can totally relaye..lol...guys suck!!! well not all but most..lol..anyways great poem 5/5 keep it up...luv yas mwah |
I know how you feel in this poem, it has real depth, i really enjoyed reading it |
wow this poem is like reading my feelings, its deep great job! *HEAther |
by LostInLife!
wow, that was excellent! you did another brill job on that |