Aww...i really like this poem...it is cute..and i really like how you put this all together....5/5
good job

Okies, I LOVED this one alot. You're an amazing writer in my opinion, very strong feelings into it, when I read your poems, I feel it, and that is how a writer is supposed to make their veiwers feel. I'm adding you to my favorites, keep up the good work. If you get a chance and want to read some poems, you can look at mine. Thanks. =)
-Ally