Ooooh. wowee-- Noni! This was really dark, and exactly how dark poems should be like.

Nicely done! Your flow and rhyming in this were great aswell. A top job! Keep it up! 5/5

Natalie``

Noni! Your poetry is so beautiful, even in the darkest of topics, you manage to write something amazing. What is triggering all this darkness and sadness? It's beautiful, but it's not pretty if it hurts you. I hope you're ok. Again, amazing poem!

Wonderful poem!!! I love this! I can't even begin to explain my infatuation with vampires and such...I believe you would like this roleplaying site I go on, if you would like to know about it, just let me know hun! Keep up your excellent work. You master all topics of poetry all the time. xxx

Favorite. I love it. 5/5