Void

by Lisa   Mar 7, 2004


I go to bed
With thoughts of a lost love floating in my head
I wake up sad
Force on a smile
Inside I'm mad
For awhile
I wonder how
I'll end up now
Sad and lonely
Love's so phony
Why do I cry
I wonder why
Why can't I have
Whole love not half
I wonder why
I always cry
My heart just breaks
My soul just aches
My love destroyed
A life that's void
My heart a hole
A pain so old
Where do I go
How do I live
Without someone
No love to give.

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  • 19 years ago

    by cindy

    I agree it needs work but what poem doesn`t I must rewrite mine all the time...You captured emotions very well, and what some ppl maybe feeling

  • 19 years ago

    by crystal

    this one doesn't quite flow right. but it's still good.
    crystal

  • 19 years ago

    by Kayla

    aww good poem...im sorry you feel this way if you do lol anwyays i can totally relate very well said...luv yas mwah

    -kayla-

  • 19 years ago

    by ..::Angel of your darkness::..

    it's a good poem, your able to show clearly what the person is feeling, it just needs to be looked over agian to make it even better
    5/5 though

  • 19 years ago

    by Daniel Goding

    Sounds like a rap, but hey it still has all the elements of a poem so 5/5 babe keep up the good work

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