Im surprised to see such a low rating on this poem, I see nothing wrong with it, my favorite type short, lovely, and meaningful.

I know exactly how that feels because you're emotions were really well described.

great poem amazing like i said aboiut ur other one great job

An interesting poem with certainly some great words and repetition, lacks a better structure however. It has a reasonable flow and some originality. A good poem! Keep writing and be strong!
luv kt

great poem!! i can relate.
crystal