What I feel for you

by AlexPotter   Aug 22, 2006


How hard is it to know
how much i care.
How hard is it to show
to you that I'll always be there.

Can you not see
that you mean the world to me.
Can you not understand
that I'll always be there to hold your hand.

I feel for you
the way I've felt for no other.
You come first in my life
before all of the others.

You've always cared
and never let me down
You've always been there
even when i was down.

The way you tickle me
when i feel like crying.
The way you smile at me
when i wish i was dieing.

These things about you
have made me love you.
The person you are
is better from afar.

Your not like most guys
which i like very much.
You have your own mind
and you don't follow that bunch.

So stay the way
you are at this very moment.
And know that i will love you
even after this moment!!!

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  • 17 years ago

    by The Sky is Falling

    Cute. I liked it. 5/5
    Check mine out

  • 17 years ago

    by Debbie

    This certainly doesn't deserve a rating of 3.7. I can safely aver that this poem is fairly fine on the whole. However, this can be greatly--and I do mean greatly--enhanced if you had the same numbers of syllables in each line or perhaps apply a regular line meter, in my humblest opinion, would make this poem better than it is now. Even so, a poem hardly could bring me nostalgic nowadays than yours. I like it very muchly... bravo... bravo...!
    Love,
    Debbie

  • 18 years ago

    by Does He Love Me 4 Me

    How cute