How cute

This certainly doesn't deserve a rating of 3.7. I can safely aver that this poem is fairly fine on the whole. However, this can be greatly--and I do mean greatly--enhanced if you had the same numbers of syllables in each line or perhaps apply a regular line meter, in my humblest opinion, would make this poem better than it is now. Even so, a poem hardly could bring me nostalgic nowadays than yours. I like it very muchly... bravo... bravo...!
Love,
Debbie

Cute. I liked it. 5/5
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