I was surprised to see no comments on this. I think this poem is brilliant. You describe how you feel so brilliantly and the reasons why. I hope this is not true, you are not weak you are still here. God Bless

Kelly
xx

I love you

Rach

I thought the emotions and the thought process in this poem were very good and the emotions that you were portraying are very real in a lot of peoples lives which made this an excellent poem.
now for a lil critique. the words you chose for rhyming were nothing special. they were over used and the rhymew scheme and flow was just kinda bland. dont get me wrong, it was good and right on key. but it felt like someone was just reading it straight threw. well thats my opinion... i gave it a 5/5 by the way.

There is a lot of emotions here and its how people feel in real life i really enjoyed reading it :)))) 99/5