by Aussie
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Amazing poem. my favorit part is: |
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Good poem. Wonderful deep words. I think the third stanza was the best, but the others we're also excellent. The rhyming in this poem was good and the flow was also. Take Care! |
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I loved it.. I was going through anerixia once.. i am not anymore cuz i tried help but every now and then i find myself not eating.. i can relate to this poem.. i really love it |
by silent eyes
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Wow what a good poem (it is kind of sad i now what its like, the fat part) keep writing ~silent eyes~ |
by silent eyes
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P.S people still comment |
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Wow great poem, 5/5 loved it... keep up the work |
by RicaLo
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I liked your use of metaphors in this poem. It made it come alive. Read some of my poems. Some of them are a bit old, though. :) |
by skynerraw
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Amazing poem, I loved it, its so sad though......keep writing! 5/5 |