5 O'Clock

by The Queen of Spades   Aug 22, 2006


5:00 sharp
And the city stands
Tall, whispering
Eloquently telling its tragic tale
And as time pursues
Past the 6, past the 7
Zooming past 8 and 9
Sauntering around 10
And strolling around 11
5:00 sharp seems to be a myth
For the whispers of daylight and clarity
Have slipped away
Into the unforgiving darkness and fog
How does time tell such a story
Of both lethargy and ambition
With no apparent words
It is such a disappointing fable
For as 5:00 sharp appears again,
Its inevitable return,
In all its unnoticed glory,
There is no reminiscence

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  • 17 years ago

    by Ashleigh Skye

    Wow I really liked this poem. You somehow managed to capture the peacefullness of a city at thoes early hours then show how it manages to grow into the busy state it becomes. I really liked it. Nice work.

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    This was fantastic!
    Original and unique in concept, and the wording was a pleasure to read.

  • 18 years ago

    by Spoken Silence

    I love this poem.... it brings such drama and tradgedy to time, the one thing we all take for granted.

  • 18 years ago

    by Melissa

    Very nice...