Very nice...

I love this poem.... it brings such drama and tradgedy to time, the one thing we all take for granted.

This was fantastic!
Original and unique in concept, and the wording was a pleasure to read.

Wow I really liked this poem. You somehow managed to capture the peacefullness of a city at thoes early hours then show how it manages to grow into the busy state it becomes. I really liked it. Nice work.