You Win

by A New Beginning   Aug 22, 2006


You yell and complain, but say everything will be fine
But everyday, it's the same old line
I'm sick of you hating me and your lies
In the end, one of us always cries
I just wanted to let you know you win
Now I'm crying crimson from my skin
It pours out dripping to the floor
As I hear you walking towards my locked door
You knock, I don't answer you
Then you try to come through
But it's locked and that's how it'll stay
Because now, like you say, everything will be ok
I've locked everyone out of my sight
Because this is the end of my life fight

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  • 18 years ago

    by Tyler

    This is an awesome poem, and thanks for the comment on my other poem

  • 18 years ago

    by Darien

    The rhymes were really good. sad poem.. i know how that feels.. written stuff like this before. good job

  • 18 years ago

    by Anthony Newsome

    This an excelent poem...I would point something out about it, but...you say you would rather cover these things. The minds eye can see...or at least mine can from time to time in your words.

  • 18 years ago

    by kayla

    This poems realy good this poem reminds me of my life basically all u wroteabout happened to me but see my man when i wouldnt unlock the door and when i was so close to death demolished my door to save my life

    sry but yea i love ur work keep it up and ull go far

  • 18 years ago

    by ~*BROKEN HYNA*~

    LOVED THIS POEM!!THANXS FOR COMMENTIN MINE!!WELL KEEP UP DA GOOD WORK!!

    ALWAYS FLORY

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