Blaming herself

by Amanda   Aug 22, 2006


Just a poem I wrote to myself about a friend....

Save her from his grip,
stop him holding tight,
Try your best to comfort her,
and hold her through the night,

Try to stop the fighting,
save her from the pain,
Wipe up all her tears,
don't let him hurt her again,

Pray for her tonight,
and hope she'll be okay,
Wish her all the best,
for every single day,

She always blames herself,
for what these evil people do,
Don't just turn and walk away,
cause what if this were you?

Copyright 2006 - Amanda Linzi

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  • 18 years ago

    by ToxicSpookyAngel

    Sad but great poem ....and thank you so much for the comment on my poem and same thing if you ever need to talk i'll give you my e mail address too

  • 18 years ago

    by Robie Lincer

    Another nice poem! loved it! yet soo sad! filled with emotions, and you know how to write your poems with creativity!

  • 18 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    I think you are a great poet as i like all of your poems, as i read one i can not stop and i just want to read more,lol. great job.

  • 18 years ago

    by Esther

    Liked n very good!

  • 18 years ago

    by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

    This sounds a lot like two things in my life right now...So I really 'felt' the poem. Nicely done.. Good rhyming as well, wasn't forced at all.

    xDarkSuicidex 5.5

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