I love this poem. I feel for you. I hope you and her both pull through.
God Bless,
Riana

Very good. I have gone throgh friendship problems too. Hold on, don't give up. Best friends come before boyfriends.

Great job with this poem love it hope you get through what ur going through good luck 5/5

Nah not my best friend but a close friend who i care alot about. Bless her, i'll drag her through it if i have to! lol :)

I loved the last stanza in this. It was amazing! There was such a great strong message in this poem, which is why I loved it so much! Very well written. Keep it up! 5/5

Natalie``

Very good poem Hun, it was well written and rather sad. I hope your friend is alright.

Even though you used the words you and her too many times than I usually like reading, the poem on whole made a lot of sense, especially when telling things to yourself to remember and making it appear to be to somebody else. I especially liked your final stanza with the last line using a very ordinary but thought out question.

This sounds a lot like two things in my life right now...So I really 'felt' the poem. Nicely done.. Good rhyming as well, wasn't forced at all.

xDarkSuicidex 5.5

Liked n very good!

I think you are a great poet as i like all of your poems, as i read one i can not stop and i just want to read more,lol. great job.

Another nice poem! loved it! yet soo sad! filled with emotions, and you know how to write your poems with creativity!

Sad but great poem ....and thank you so much for the comment on my poem and same thing if you ever need to talk i'll give you my e mail address too