I guess it doesn't help listening to a sad song while reading this, I'm crying over here Tiny D....Those last lines are just...heart breaking for me to read.....I'm so sorry this happened to you hun...thats like the worst feeling to go through! I want you to know though, don't let one bad egg spoil it for you. Don't allow him to ruin your thinking of a dream come true..Your still young how do you know this one was your dream? Don't give up girl, Fairy Tales might not be real all the time, but dreams, oh a dream can get you so far....Loved this poem! Feel better!
Chell

Aww hun this poem is extremely sad, i really hope your ok, im here if you need me, ever. The poem flowed very well tho. Luv ya hun xx

And you still have some touching up to do? That amazes me. Maybe I'm partially biased since I've loved your poems since the beginning, but I honestly don't see where anything needs to be changed. It's so bittersweet, though it is my firm belief that dreams really do come true-when it's the right one. I always feel as if you know me. Your poems are me. As always, truly incredible.

And you say you need to touch it up girl you aint got to touch up nothing it is good the way it is

Aaaaaaaaaawwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww i loved it so much man its been so long you know i needed to here your poems keep them comming girl you know this is how i feel!!

Awwwwwzz!! This is so beautiful!!! Wonderful poem I love it!! The story was a broken fairy tale and I pictured every detail in my mind. Gorgeous poem on all ends, no wonder you're on my favorites. keep it up!!! xxx

I love ALL OF YOUR POEMS EVEN IF U THINK THEY ARE BAD I STILL LIKE THEM!!!!!!!!!!!!

Wow.... thats all i can say. I could imagine every word of this poem as it came.. terrific job on your part. And by the way, you dont need to fix it up, its already one of my favorites Ive read so far! 5/5 Keep writing and take care..
*Emily*

That is a very sad and good way to describe a break up.. or whatever may have happened. I truly hope that everything is ok now. Great poem, keep it up!

Take Care and God Bless,
Sarah-Joy

Very good poem. Nice flow. Great job! Keep it up! 5/5. ~Megan~

AMAZING

Wow This poem is just...wow...I am utterly speechless. You write so well it's hard to believe.

Awwww, this is gonna make me cry!
i'm so sorry for whatever happened to you that happened. i know where you were at, i'm here now.
you are an amazing poet, no doubt.

5/5

-Tiana

Another awesome write. You really are very talented :)

Love ur poems...

This i think is the best poem i have ever read

I love your poem. I look around at my family and I see that there's only a few happy endings. I've come to realize that fairy tales are just that. They are make believe. Telling the little girls that you can fall in-love in an instant and live happily ever after. When in the real world you don't.

That was amazing!

The words, the lines.. every part of the poem is getting inside the reader, and though i have a happy life with my partner i can feel the pain. it deserves a 5/5. great work!

Nice written, can feel the hurt.