It is a great poem, so deep and I dont think everyone can get the meaning of it,
you are talented.5/5

This was a pretty good poem, the only problem I see with it is the fact you called the creature "The It", but referred to it as a male. You wrote 'He', so it basically defeated the purpose of the name" I understand what you are writing about, but change either the name of the creature, or refer to it as 'IT'. Good poem though.