by Michael D Nalley Aug 23, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
lasting love
The tears I've cried have cleared my eyes |
by S R P
Beautifully written.. Your words have a way of reaching out and touching the heart and soul of the reader. |
Aww. It's horribly sad...But in a good sort of way lol. I really liked how you managed to put the questions in. It really made the poem worth reading. I also liked how well the flow went. Great write! =) 5/5 xoxo |
The moral of this poem is so true and overall this poem made me very emotional. it is a great write i hope your proud |
by LadyPearl
As always, your flow is perfect and your way of words are enchanting. keep it up |
by Biscuit
Good rhyming and lots of alliteration and assonance. kept me intrested all the way through. |