Questions of the Rejected & Abused (how does it feel?)

by RadianceInReverse   Aug 23, 2006


How Does it Feel?
to be stepped on
to be rejected, left behind

How does it feel?
to know that nobody cares
to know that you failed, everyone

How does it feel?
to cry yourself to sleep every-night
to hide away every thing you are

How does it feel?
to lose everything precious to you
to pretend to be happy, not scared

How does it feel?
to have your dreams crushed
to feel unwanted, not loved

How does it feel?
to want to just fade away
to want not to be noticed, set apart from the crowd

How does it feel?
to walk in my torn shoes
to be disappointed in yourself

Now can YOU see?
what I go through every night
what I see every waking moment

Don't you wish,
you were nicer to me?
Don't you wish,
you got to know the real me?

How does it feel, to know
your the reason I'm no longer here?

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  • 18 years ago

    by Matthew A.

    Nice....i can feel the pain that was in this and understand it....nice job...

    matt

  • 18 years ago

    by Cody

    Beautiful it was great it reminds me of a new one I wrote called Your Game but with spme very key diffrences but I can understand the feeling in all to well

  • 18 years ago

    by Switchblade89

    That was good...never personally felt like this but then again I also wrote one kind of sort of like this..lol..haven't read one of yours in awhile...I like it..very emotional...

  • 18 years ago

    by Ruthie

    Hey there :) I havn't seen u in ages! This was so deep man I thought I was going 2 cry! I loved how you started off each stanza with a question. It realy drew ur reader in :) it doesn't always work but for this poem it did! so, well written! Keep it up!

    luv ya ruthie xoxo

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