This is a deep piece that posseses obvious emotional ties to you that come clear through your words. My word of advice would be to always double check your spelling.

"You are -tarring- me apart bit by bit" - tearing*
You never take me seriously or think things -threw-" - through

Otherwise, a nice piece. Thank you so much for your comment on my poem, it really means a lot to me. Best wishes, and blessed be. *Athame