For ben

by i love ben!!   Aug 23, 2006


When i feel your touch thats all i want to feel
When i hear your voice thats all i want to hear
When you look into my eyes mountains tremble

I cant help wanting to be around you
I admire everything that you do.
I dont know what it is about you but you\'ve somehow captured my heart.

Its because of you i want to be a better person.
I do the right things to impress you so you\'ll be proud of me.

I\'ll be the one to wipe your tears when you\'re sad.
I\'ll be there for you when no one else will.
I\'ll be your bestfriend through thick and thin.

I\'ll be there by your side til the end.

...*for ben*...(my next bf..hehe)

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  • 18 years ago

    by Lauren

    Thanks for commentin my poem...i can really relate to this one especially the part about doing the right thing so he'll be proud bc thats exacly wut i do bc of my boyfriend....u got talent

  • 18 years ago

    by DeadGirl AKA Becka

    That is such a cute poem, Im really looking forward to read all your poems! ~Oh and Thanx for the comment, It means alot to know that people like my work:) Luvs *~DeadGirl~*

  • 18 years ago

    by Lithium

    Awww thats so cute, i like the ideas in your poem very sweet xox sam

  • 18 years ago

    by Jessica

    Awh, that was quite cutee.. The flow was good and the emotion clear.. I think that the descriptions could be improved though, try adding more detail into them.. Nice job 4/5

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