Awh, that was quite cutee.. The flow was good and the emotion clear.. I think that the descriptions could be improved though, try adding more detail into them.. Nice job 4/5

Awww thats so cute, i like the ideas in your poem very sweet xox sam

That is such a cute poem, Im really looking forward to read all your poems! ~Oh and Thanx for the comment, It means alot to know that people like my work:) Luvs *~DeadGirl~*

Thanks for commentin my poem...i can really relate to this one especially the part about doing the right thing so he'll be proud bc thats exacly wut i do bc of my boyfriend....u got talent